content reduction - improve clarity

[G201021]

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https://open-learning-exchange.github.io/#!pages/manual/planet/overview.md

Problem

For the sentence " highly effective and affordable learning systems that can benefit all of their people."

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Proposed solution(s)

I would suggest rephrasing that by saying the following, "effecting and affordable learning systems for everyone"

[xyb994]

Sure, go ahead and create a pull request for it!

btw chatgpt suggested We collaborate with local entrepreneurs, educators, and practitioners to promote effective, affordable learning systems for everyone.

[G201021]

I don't think "local" since OLE has worked in other parts of the world, not within the united states alone. Im saying cause I remember reading something about OLE facilitating learning in parts like canada, kenya and south America.

[xyb994]

Fair enough, local could be ambiguous and implying within the US. nation-based seems a little confusing so I thought we could improve that part together.

What about We collaborate with community-based entrepreneurs, educators, and practitioners worldwide to promote effective and affordable learning systems for everyone?

[G201021]

that sounds better, since we consider the possibility of other countries implementing this system for the near future and OLE is already collaborating and have their system implemented in other countries.