Open tlaguna opened 3 years ago
We will work with other scientists in generating scientific solutions to daily life problems related to Food and Nutrition for the general public in Madrid area. We aim to help citizens feel connected with Science in a way they can find it useful and let them acquire a more scientific mentality. We are working open because transparency is key to make the public engage with Science and scientists and viceversa.
This is the first input:
After trying to simplify it:
Still a few not-allowed words but I think I cannot avoid them
This is the simplified vision statement We will work with other scientists to fix common food problems for people in the Madrid area. We want to help them with their problems with food and to understand better the world based on facts to make it better. We are working open because we think this will make the people work better with scientists and we will get better and faster solutions to their food problems.
We will work with other scientists to fix common food problems for people in Madrid. We will provide tools to connect people with scientists, where citizens will expose their issues with food and nutrition. Scientists will create specific open projects and will work in collaboration to help solve these problems. We are working open because we think transparency is the key to connect Science with society.
Your project sounds really interesting and I can't wait to hear more about how you are going to engage the public with science. Can I suggest that you break up your first sentence into two shorter sentences as I think it will read better. Something like - 'We will work with other scientists in generating scientific solutions to daily life problems for the general public in the Madrid area. This will help them to feel connected with Science in a useful way and let them acquire a more scientific mentality.'
Hi @tlaguna, I'm excited to see how this turns out! A few notes about the vision statement:
Your project sounds really interesting and I can't wait to hear more about how you are going to engage the public with science. Can I suggest that you break up your first sentence into two shorter sentences as I think it will read better. Something like - 'We will work with other scientists in generating scientific solutions to daily life problems for the general public in the Madrid area. This will help them to feel connected with Science in a useful way and let them acquire a more scientific mentality.'
Thank you @EKaroune for your comments, indeed the first sentence was too long!
Hi @tlaguna, I'm excited to see how this turns out! A few notes about the vision statement:
* I agree with EKaroune, the first sentence is a bit long. * 'scientific solutions to daily life problems' seems vague to me. What's the scope of the problems you'll be working on? i.e., are you working to solve problems at the level of individuals, neighbourhoods, or the entire city? or is your goal to set up a general framework that can connect a the public with scientists who work on their particular problem? Whatever your focus is, it sounds exciting :)
Hi @koudyk! After some counseling (mentors and other contacts) we decided to narrow the scope of "daily life problems" to problems focused in the Food & Nutrition area, where my collaborator and me develop our research.
Glad that sounds exciting for you! Keep posted ;-)
Hi @koudyk! After some counseling (mentors and other contacts) we decided to narrow the scope of "daily life problems" to problems focused in the Food & Nutrition area, where my collaborator and me develop our research.
Focusing on your research area sounds like a great way to start! Nutrition would be a great topic to engage the public. It seems like many people are concerned about eating well, but so many people fall for diet fads that aren't backed up by science. Looking forward to seeing this project evolve :)
BTW, it looks like the link to your Open Canvas doesn't go where you want it to. It works when I copy & paste it, but not when I click it.
BTW, it looks like the link to your Open Canvas doesn't go where you want it to. It works when I copy & paste it, but not when I click it.
Solved! ;-)
@all-contributors please add @tlaguna for content and idea.
@malvikasharan
I've put up a pull request to add @tlaguna! :tada:
@all-contributors please add @koudyk for review.
@malvikasharan
I've put up a pull request to add @koudyk! :tada:
@all-contributors please add @EKaroune for review.
@malvikasharan
I've put up a pull request to add @EKaroune! :tada:
Science For All - Sci4All
Project Lead: Teresa Laguna @tlaguna
Project team: Laura Marcos @laurichi13
Mentor: Katharina Lauer @klauer2207
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