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Saving home energy using open organization principles #146

Closed RonMcFarland closed 1 year ago

RonMcFarland commented 2 years ago

Much has been written about carbon free energy generation, but it might be more productive to look at how energy is used, and possibly wasted. I have written a 2-part article series on how particularly electrical energy could be used more efficiently based on the book "Reinventing Fire: Bold Business Solutions for the New Energy Era". It is based on research by the Rocky Mountain Institute. This article stresses the very important role Open Organization Principles play.

semioticrobotic commented 2 years ago

This sounds interesting, @RonMcFarland. Looking forward to reading it!

RonMcFarland commented 2 years ago

Bryan, I will share a draft of this article with you. I have already shared it with AmyJune just for her reference, as she was interested in the subject personally. I think it is best to get it into editing after my articles on industry disruption are into production.

AmyJuneH commented 2 years ago

Seth made some comments in the doc, please take a look and let me know when its ready to hit the copy edit board. Thanks.

RonMcFarland commented 2 years ago

AmyJune, I can't seem to find Seth's comments. Are they in the Google Doc?

AmyJuneH commented 2 years ago

My apologies. Seth made edits versus comments in the doc. You can view them in the edit history.

RonMcFarland commented 2 years ago

AmyJune,

Oh. I see the edit history now. I'll look through the two parts and get back to you shortly.

Thanks,

Ron

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My apologies. Seth made edits versus comments in the doc. You can view them in the edit history.

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RonMcFarland commented 2 years ago

AmyJune,

I just reviewed both parts of this article. Everything looks good to me.

Cheers,

Ron

On Thu, Aug 18, 2022 at 9:46 AM Ronald McFarland @.***> wrote:

AmyJune,

Oh. I see the edit history now. I'll look through the two parts and get back to you shortly.

Thanks,

Ron

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RonMcFarland commented 2 years ago

AmyJune, I just reviewed both parts of this article. Everything looks good to me. Cheers, Ron

AmyJuneH commented 2 years ago

Great, I will move the doc into the general review board.

AmyJuneH commented 2 years ago

FYI - the OSDC team split this into 2 tasks, one for each article.

RonMcFarland commented 2 years ago

Great AmyJune,

Thanks,

Ron

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Great, I will move the doc into the general review board.

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AmyJuneH commented 2 years ago

moved into copy editing on the OSDC side

AmyJuneH commented 2 years ago

Hey there!

Saving energy using open organization principles (part one) is up for review

Preview link https://opensource.com/preview-link/node/70181/01be6402-182b-491e-96a6-a1b251ee1cbe

I will also send in an email thread so edits and comments will be easy to parse

RonMcFarland commented 2 years ago

Here are some very small changes.....

  1. In this sentence, "First, the building energy consultant makes an appointment with their most trusted electricity user and explains that they want the user to save money."  ..."their" should be changed to "his" and "they" to "he wants".2.  In this sentence, "The consultant also shows the electricity user the data below from Reinventing Fire, which confirms that it's worth the investment in energy-saving measures. "....."below" should be "above".3.  In this sentence, "Users can also consider where the light is shining Is it exactly where and when it is needed?"... a period is required between "shining" and "Is".  Those three above are all the small things I found that should be changed.
semioticrobotic commented 2 years ago

Scheduled to publish on September 05, 2022.