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Charta according to the openETCS PCA V.3.0.2
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Charter Review: Length and Structure #3

Open jastram opened 10 years ago

jastram commented 10 years ago

Review re #2

Overall comment: To increase the chance that the Charter is actually being read, I would try to shorten it. Therefore, my review comments will contain a number of suggestions to this end.

Specifically, there seems to be some repetition. There is a chapter "Governance and Precedence" on page 2 and "Governance" on page 6, they could be unified.

There is talk about hosted projects on page 6 ("Hosting Private Projects") and page 2 ("Hosted Projects")

Page 1 contains a lot of information, that could and should be condensed. These are recorded in #4.