issue 1:
you write about the modeling of the SRS, but within the scope of the openETCS, we will NOT modeling the SRS but the SSRS
Issue 2:
The chapter only focus on the modeling, but omit to mention how the SSRS will be created.
Issue 3:
The sentences are not clearly formulated.
you write for example: "The modeling of the SRS would be require the following steps: to define the scope of the model"
--> The sentence not make a sense for me
issue 4:
you write: "The first outcome of this Task force will an overview of all necessary documents from the
operator, the industry and all the European Railway Authorities to manage this kind of a
documents."
--> I don't understand the meaning
issue 1: you write about the modeling of the SRS, but within the scope of the openETCS, we will NOT modeling the SRS but the SSRS
Issue 2: The chapter only focus on the modeling, but omit to mention how the SSRS will be created.
Issue 3: The sentences are not clearly formulated. you write for example: "The modeling of the SRS would be require the following steps: to define the scope of the model" --> The sentence not make a sense for me
issue 4: you write: "The first outcome of this Task force will an overview of all necessary documents from the operator, the industry and all the European Railway Authorities to manage this kind of a documents." --> I don't understand the meaning