Closed MariellePetitDoche closed 9 years ago
Thanks a lot Marielle on time spent to give feedback. I will look at them in detail on monday.
For all reviewers:
I intend to push a new revision tomorrow that takes into account most of the remarks concerning chapters 1 and 2 and provides clarification on document purpose and organization. Please wait for it before any reading and review
Le 30 oct. 2015 à 17:52, MariellePetitDoche notifications@github.com a écrit :
Here my comments on the document linked to #504
§ 1.1 and Fig 2:
- in the figure are mixed functionnal, HW, procedural,... requirements, at the top level (for example from User stories or Cenelec Standard) and all seems to be derived up to SW level (I understand that only specification and design of SW appear on the figure, not the Validation). But I think that lots of the initial requirements can not be derived on Sw, but on other activities (quality or project plan, Validation,...) or subsystems (HW, API,...); How it is plan to take into account these exported requirements ?
- some non-functional requirements can be introduced (or derived from Cenelec standards) in openETCS quality or project plans.
- in the fig 2 it seems there is a direct traceability between SRS and Cenelec (orange arrow): I am not agree. in the current state of SRS it is difficult to explicitly defined a traceability between this document and stakeholders requirements. I consider more the SRS in midway between stakeholders requirement and a real System specification, I will put it in parallel of Cenelec and User stories.
- I think validation are missing in fig 1 and 2: lots of requirements can not be derived up to SW code only, but will be link to the different test or V&V phases.
§1.2 and Fig4 , It is necessary to clarify the data dictionary model and how it is defined (textual, SysML, Scade ?) as a Scade representation of it is one of the SW model.
-§2.2.1:
- Please give clearly definition of the mining of the different arrows (for example "refines" seems to correspond to a SysML definition which is very different from a classical formal definition of "refines").
- why "Documentation" is an activity ?
- why "V&V" do not "use" the requirement database ?
- meaning of the arrows are not clear for me, so I do not understand why there are no linked between System model and requirement database or functional model and requirement data base. The figure need some comments as it is not self-sufficient for those who are not used of these notations.
§2.2.2: This means we consider only functional requirements. User stories, SRS, API or Cenelec are far to contain only functional requirements.
Fig 7 : I do not think that the "openETCS system designer" is in charge of all the actions. Typically "trace model element to SRS" is made by SW designer, "Create verification view" by a verificator....
§1 and 2 : Maybe it will be nice to have a look on QA plan (WP1 https://github.com/openETCS/governance/blob/master/QA%20Plan/D1.3.1_QA_Plan.pdf), definition plan (WP2 https://github.com/openETCS/requirements) and safety plan (WP4 https://github.com/openETCS/validation/tree/master/Reports/D4.2) to have a better view of what would be expected at the beginning of the project.
§3 Ok for me.
-§4.2.3, for the moment the tool is Scade studio (v16.2)
§5, in the view of the openETCS toolchain, totally open, I am agree with the left branch (ProR linked to papyrus). However in practice the sysML model has been made with Scade system which contains an old version of papyrus not really compatible with the one in openETCS toolchain. In this case I'am not sure that ProR can be used at system level (which do not allow us to have an open-source tool for traceability !)
§ 5.1.2: How is identify the first sentence "If the establishment....." ? Are we sure that we shall always share such a requirement in different sub requirements with different Id ? Are we not going to lost information (for example in this case that ALL the sequence of actions shall be made in a given order) ?
§5, 6 and 7: Three solutions are proposed: -why ? maybe an introduction in the document is missing to explain its contents and why 3 solutions are proposed
some parts of some solutions are already implemented or largely analyzed (eg. link between ProR and payprus, use of genDoc...) other seems just propositions. It will be nice to have a clear view of what exists and can be used right now, and other elements. To continue depending updating and comments.
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Hi all,
I have just pushed a new revision of document that addresses most remarks from Marielle concerning first chapters (introduction, main expectations concerning traceability, tool capabilities to support traceability). So new document can be reviewed up to chapter 5.1 (included).
Concerning current traceability solution (chapter 5), I’m currently updating description with existing tools and their use according to the 5 phases of development process. So, even if I get material, I still need more time to update it for good quality and precise semantics presentation.
I hope to complete document (update of chapter 5 and chapter 6) for end of this week.
Le 30 oct. 2015 à 17:52, MariellePetitDoche notifications@github.com a écrit :
Here my comments on the document linked to #504
§ 1.1 and Fig 2:
- in the figure are mixed functionnal, HW, procedural,... requirements, at the top level (for example from User stories or Cenelec Standard) and all seems to be derived up to SW level (I understand that only specification and design of SW appear on the figure, not the Validation). But I think that lots of the initial requirements can not be derived on Sw, but on other activities (quality or project plan, Validation,...) or subsystems (HW, API,...); How it is plan to take into account these exported requirements ?
- some non-functional requirements can be introduced (or derived from Cenelec standards) in openETCS quality or project plans.
- in the fig 2 it seems there is a direct traceability between SRS and Cenelec (orange arrow): I am not agree. in the current state of SRS it is difficult to explicitly defined a traceability between this document and stakeholders requirements. I consider more the SRS in midway between stakeholders requirement and a real System specification, I will put it in parallel of Cenelec and User stories.
- I think validation are missing in fig 1 and 2: lots of requirements can not be derived up to SW code only, but will be link to the different test or V&V phases.
§1.2 and Fig4 , It is necessary to clarify the data dictionary model and how it is defined (textual, SysML, Scade ?) as a Scade representation of it is one of the SW model.
-§2.2.1:
- Please give clearly definition of the mining of the different arrows (for example "refines" seems to correspond to a SysML definition which is very different from a classical formal definition of "refines").
- why "Documentation" is an activity ?
- why "V&V" do not "use" the requirement database ?
- meaning of the arrows are not clear for me, so I do not understand why there are no linked between System model and requirement database or functional model and requirement data base. The figure need some comments as it is not self-sufficient for those who are not used of these notations.
§2.2.2: This means we consider only functional requirements. User stories, SRS, API or Cenelec are far to contain only functional requirements.
Fig 7 : I do not think that the "openETCS system designer" is in charge of all the actions. Typically "trace model element to SRS" is made by SW designer, "Create verification view" by a verificator....
§1 and 2 : Maybe it will be nice to have a look on QA plan (WP1 https://github.com/openETCS/governance/blob/master/QA%20Plan/D1.3.1_QA_Plan.pdf), definition plan (WP2 https://github.com/openETCS/requirements) and safety plan (WP4 https://github.com/openETCS/validation/tree/master/Reports/D4.2) to have a better view of what would be expected at the beginning of the project.
§3 Ok for me.
-§4.2.3, for the moment the tool is Scade studio (v16.2)
§5, in the view of the openETCS toolchain, totally open, I am agree with the left branch (ProR linked to papyrus). However in practice the sysML model has been made with Scade system which contains an old version of papyrus not really compatible with the one in openETCS toolchain. In this case I'am not sure that ProR can be used at system level (which do not allow us to have an open-source tool for traceability !)
§ 5.1.2: How is identify the first sentence "If the establishment....." ? Are we sure that we shall always share such a requirement in different sub requirements with different Id ? Are we not going to lost information (for example in this case that ALL the sequence of actions shall be made in a given order) ?
§5, 6 and 7: Three solutions are proposed: -why ? maybe an introduction in the document is missing to explain its contents and why 3 solutions are proposed
some parts of some solutions are already implemented or largely analyzed (eg. link between ProR and payprus, use of genDoc...) other seems just propositions. It will be nice to have a clear view of what exists and can be used right now, and other elements. To continue depending updating and comments.
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New Reviewer: @janWelte
Does any of you know if safety requirements identified during PoC on MoRC have been registered into .ReqIF requirements files? Do we have safety requirements to trace in the current design SCADE model?
I have just pushed a new revision of the document that now takes into account most important remarks from Marielle and can be reviewed by any partner (especially Jan).
Review "Traceability Architecture in OpenETCS" (by Jan Welte for WP 4)
Finally done. Thanks for the very good document, which gives a great overview and derives some valuable concepts
Thanks for this feedback.
Le 20 nov. 2015 à 17:03, Jan Welte notifications@github.com a écrit :
Finally done. Thanks for the very good document, which gives a great overview and derives some valuable concepts
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Dear all,
Complete tutorial material to use ReqCycle for traceability between requirements and SysML model (mainly for architecture verification) is available on tool chain documentation wiki:
Le 20 nov. 2015 à 17:06, FAUDOU raphael raphael.faudou@samares-engineering.com a écrit :
Thanks for this feedback.
Le 20 nov. 2015 à 17:03, Jan Welte notifications@github.com a écrit :
Finally done. Thanks for the very good document, which gives a great overview and derives some valuable concepts
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The review has been concluded.
Here my comments on the document linked to #504
in the current state of SRS it is difficult to explicitly defined a traceability between this document and stakeholders requirements. I consider more the SRS in midway between stakeholders requirement and a real System specification, I will put it in parallel of Cenelec and User stories.
-§2.2.1:
-§4.2.3, for the moment the tool is Scade studio (v16.2)
To continue depending updating and comments.