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7 years ago - [ ] "if you wanted to..."/"if you intend to": not flagged; examples: "For example, to make the device
06:01.0 available for guests" ; "If you intend to use a watchdog device attached to the &xen; host, use only one at a time." - [ ] "in case you want to"=>"to": not a good idea: "In case you want to create a snapshot from a running system, be aware that the snapshot only captures the state of the disk"; "Shut down the VM Guest in case you want to create a snapshot from a guest that is not running."
- [ ] "some" flagged, should suggest "selected" not removal: "A list of some /vm/
entries follows:" - [ ] "may want to" should suggest "can" not "should": "At that point, you may want to merge the original base image and the derived image to create a new base image."
- [ ] can't detect "If you want to" when pulled apart: "If you want the display manager to start an X-Server after the upgrade, change the setting.": "To have the display manager start an X server..."