Sorry for the delay...I got busy. I made most of Carl's changes, please review. The problem I had is with examples that were suggested and section 5.5. I thought, and would want to confirm that the alignment with processes was going to be in a Part 2? If so, it needs to make it clear that the changes will be in Part 2, but I could be missing something. Also, I was uncertain about the examples....what you would like to see.
Sorry for the delay...I got busy. I made most of Carl's changes, please review. The problem I had is with examples that were suggested and section 5.5. I thought, and would want to confirm that the alignment with processes was going to be in a Part 2? If so, it needs to make it clear that the changes will be in Part 2, but I could be missing something. Also, I was uncertain about the examples....what you would like to see.