sgrellet
commented
2 years ago We can reuse the sentence that is already at the end of the Introduction : "A technical note describing the changes from the earlier version is available as Annex C." and add it right after this sentence in the Foreword 'The Sample model has also been refined. Given the integral nature of the Sample model, is has been decided to include that term in the name of the standard. '
KathiSchleidt
-116 The main changes are as follows: Note that the information provided in the list of main changes compared to the previous version is quite vague. It could be helpful to the user to give a clearer indication of what has been improved/how improvements have been made, i.e. has the text been restructured? has additional detail been added? has the wording been clarified? etc. Adding a cross-reference to Annex C could perhaps help with this.
Section: Foreword