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Revision Needed For Design Report 00001 #5

Open Carton9 opened 5 years ago

Carton9 commented 5 years ago

@gjsmo @sbergested Can you guys read the doc and select the design you like?

gjsmo commented 5 years ago

The CAN + SpaceWire design looks good. I'd like to see a bit more information on how redundancy works. Ideally, everything should be redundant if possible - see this SpaceWire User's Guide, page 30.

The bandwidth calculation is ok, but can you put it in a table for readability?

Can you also address using Ethernet in section 4?

gjsmo commented 5 years ago

Also, it looks like your BiBTeX references are broken. You need to add the actual bibliography to the document, in a section at the end.

Carton9 commented 5 years ago

Editing Finish

gjsmo commented 5 years ago

Same comment about the bibliography as in DR00002, see DR00006 for an example.

Also please add SpaceFibre in section 4, as a possible future upgrade.