Closed hxrts closed 5 years ago
These are really good edits overall - I think a few of them might not be needed after you merge the conflicts though, since some of the more obvious stuff has been fixed.
Most of this found its way into the draft, thanks!
did a full pass. added a bunch of TODO comments.
this might have diverged from the most recent version since I started 2 days ago, but can fix that tomorrow.