Hopefully haven't mentioned anything already covered by Jez's PR.
Experienced Mapper Only - shouldn't that be plural mappers?
Caretography - should be Cartography?
created by these worlds - should the word by be emphasised in a different way?
Replacing the classics - singular classic?
YoutMappers - missing h
Stockport council - capitalise Council
centers - should be centres
10:00, OpenDatathon activities in Japan - first sentence needs to be rewritten, suggest:
As one of the outreach activities in Japan, OpenDatathon regularly holds mapping parties simultaneously with Wikipedia editing events.
11:30, Roland Olbricht - struggling to understand this description:
"The publicly announced channels..." - maybe better with "The public announcement channels" or communication channels?
"low attendance" - I think this means low readership?
"were unilaterally controlling that." - "that" seems like it's referring to the low attendance of the mailing list and wiki, when I assume it means controlling tag semantics?
"In this birds of a feather" - English is my native language I have no idea what this means here!
Hopefully haven't mentioned anything already covered by Jez's PR.
10:00, OpenDatathon activities in Japan - first sentence needs to be rewritten, suggest:
As one of the outreach activities in Japan, OpenDatathon regularly holds mapping parties simultaneously with Wikipedia editing events.
11:30, Roland Olbricht - struggling to understand this description: