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A Vocabulary of Path Properties
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Rephrase sentence in Transparency definition #71

Closed renghardt closed 2 years ago

renghardt commented 2 years ago

Via @SpencerDawkins in Last Call:

In the definition of “Transparency”, I found this sentence difficult to parse:

A can for example be blocking packets or reading and modifying (other protocol) headers or payloads.

Perhaps

For example, A can be blocking packets or reading and modifying (other protocol) headers or payloads.

cyrill-k commented 2 years ago

Sounds good to me :+1: