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Need your feedback: FirePress - the Why #23

Closed pascalandy closed 8 years ago

pascalandy commented 8 years ago

Hey guys! I'm looking for the native english speakers feedback @gonzalezfluz @JillMurwin

Here you can hear me saying it :)

Here it is my copy titled Why FirePress. There are two things to evaluate:

1) The overall feel. 2) The english mistakes I could have made.

Hope this will resonate with you :)

Cheers! Pascal

JillMurwin commented 8 years ago

Hello Pascal

Jumping on a flight to Paris. Will look at this when settled. I’ll miss the June meetings (middle of the night in France) but will return to the USA July 5th.

Sending love and hugs….and success energy!

Jill Chasing ATLAS, LLC chasingatlas.com +1 435 225 2563

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Hey guys! I'm looking for the native english speakers feedback @gonzalezfluz @lraynak :)

Here you can find the audio and the text of my copy titled Why FirePress. There is two things to evaluate:

1) The overall feel. 2) The english mistakes I could have made.

Hope this will resonate with you :)

Cheers! Pascal

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pascalandy commented 8 years ago

Great! Have a nice stay in Paris.

Cheers! Pascal

On June 5, 2016 at 12:55:56 AM, JillMurwin (notifications@github.com) wrote:

Hello Pascal

Jumping on a flight to Paris. Will look at this when settled. I’ll miss the June meetings (middle of the night in France) but will return to the USA July 5th.

Sending love and hugs….and success energy!

Jill Chasing ATLAS, LLC chasingatlas.com +1 435 225 2563

On Jun 4, 2016, at 6:22 PM, Pascal Andy notifications@github.com wrote:

Hey guys! I'm looking for the native english speakers feedback @gonzalezfluz @lraynak :)

Here you can find the audio and the text of my copy titled Why FirePress. There is two things to evaluate:

1) The overall feel. 2) The english mistakes I could have made.

Hope this will resonate with you :)

Cheers! Pascal

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Denisside commented 8 years ago

Hello Pascal! This is great! I love it! I love the tone, the momentum, the impact, the silences, the quality, the music! All is great! I dont see or hear any mistakes! For sure the experts in english will confirm, but for me all is perfect! I am impress and I am as well interested in finding more about your services! Thanks again for asking our inputs and I will talk with you soon. Congratulations again for this greta work!!!! Impressive !!!! Denis

gonzalezfluz commented 8 years ago

Hi Pascal, this was awesome! There are some tiny grammatical mistakes here and there, but I don't think it's an issue. I'm happy to look over the transcript, but I actually think they add a bit of personality (and French-speaking background) and don't take away from what you are presenting. Great job!!

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Hello Pascal! This is great! I love it! I love the tone, the momentum, the impact, the silences, the quality, the music! All is great! I dont see or hear any mistakes! For sure the experts in english will confirm, but for me all is perfect! I am impress and I am as well interested in finding more about your services! Thanks again for asking our inputs and I will talk with you soon. Congratulations again for this greta work!!!! Impressive !!!! Denis

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pascalandy commented 8 years ago

@JillMurwin I'll do the video soon, so you don't have to review this anymore :)