Under "About" Tab:
3rd paragraph - "The 38th floor Pinnacle Club of the Grand Hyatt Denver, with the entire conference floor provides uninterrupted majestic views ..." The comma after Denver is weird - either needs another (after "floor" or to be removed.
What programming languages should I know? " Many sessions might have code in them, but you’ll be able to follow even if you don’t know that language that is used. " change first "that" to "the"
Under Speakers:
Alberto Brandolini:
bio: "An active consultant in software product development, he also run his company Avanscoperta." Should be "runs"
workshop: "In this two days format we’ll experience the different formats, working around real business problems." Should be "day"
workshop: "Design-Level EventStorming: leveraging collaborative modelling to sketck bullet-proof model quickly." Should that be "sketch"?
workshop: "From sticky notes to working software. When to go for a sophisticated architecture," Should end with a period, not a comma.
Under "Schedule" Tab:
"Optional full-day pre-conference workshops will be offered on Tuesday, September 19 and Wednesday from 9:00 AM - 4:30 PM." It looks like "September 20" got left out.
Under "Location" Tab:
"Hotel room availability at this time of year in Denver is extremely limited, so we strongly recommend that attendees traveling out of town reserve their rooms at the Grand Hyatt as early as possible." It's more of a preference - "Traveling out of town" sounds like they're traveling out of Denver, not into Denver. Maybe, "traveling from out of town", or "coming in from out of town"?
I notice that with Alberto's speaker bio there is also a description of his workshop, but Eric's bio doesn't include his workshop description (but you list it under the Workshop tab). Or maybe you're planning to move Alberto's workshop description over?
One other nit-picky thing that you might have already thought through and decided on: The conference on the home page is billed as Sept. 21-22, Workshops on Sep. 19-20, but when you lick "Stay Updated" it just lumps the whole thing together as a conference on Sept. 19-22. To me, it's not consistent, but again, according to preference.
paulrayner
commented
7 years ago
Under "About" Tab: 3rd paragraph - "The 38th floor Pinnacle Club of the Grand Hyatt Denver, with the entire conference floor provides uninterrupted majestic views ..." The comma after Denver is weird - either needs another (after "floor" or to be removed.
What programming languages should I know? " Many sessions might have code in them, but you’ll be able to follow even if you don’t know that language that is used. " change first "that" to "the" Under Speakers:
Alberto Brandolini:
bio: "An active consultant in software product development, he also run his company Avanscoperta." Should be "runs" workshop: "In this two days format we’ll experience the different formats, working around real business problems." Should be "day" workshop: "Design-Level EventStorming: leveraging collaborative modelling to sketck bullet-proof model quickly." Should that be "sketch"? workshop: "From sticky notes to working software. When to go for a sophisticated architecture," Should end with a period, not a comma. Under "Schedule" Tab: "Optional full-day pre-conference workshops will be offered on Tuesday, September 19 and Wednesday from 9:00 AM - 4:30 PM." It looks like "September 20" got left out. Under "Location" Tab: "Hotel room availability at this time of year in Denver is extremely limited, so we strongly recommend that attendees traveling out of town reserve their rooms at the Grand Hyatt as early as possible." It's more of a preference - "Traveling out of town" sounds like they're traveling out of Denver, not into Denver. Maybe, "traveling from out of town", or "coming in from out of town"? I notice that with Alberto's speaker bio there is also a description of his workshop, but Eric's bio doesn't include his workshop description (but you list it under the Workshop tab). Or maybe you're planning to move Alberto's workshop description over?
One other nit-picky thing that you might have already thought through and decided on: The conference on the home page is billed as Sept. 21-22, Workshops on Sep. 19-20, but when you lick "Stay Updated" it just lumps the whole thing together as a conference on Sept. 19-22. To me, it's not consistent, but again, according to preference.