Here are the suggestions of changes to the copy--goal of the changes was for it to be more understandable from a non-technical perspective, demonstrate confidence in our ability with a little more enthusiasm(---hoping that will be contagious to the reader), having them feel more compelled to taking the next course of action--contact or following.
Here are the suggestions of changes to the copy--goal of the changes was for it to be more understandable from a non-technical perspective, demonstrate confidence in our ability with a little more enthusiasm(---hoping that will be contagious to the reader), having them feel more compelled to taking the next course of action--contact or following.