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post-graduate (verbose [academic] version)

This paper examines the visual design process, publishing workflow, and marketing strategy of the VSKK (Vysoká Škola Kreativní Komunikace) student magazine Povstalec N°2 for print and web. The theoretical part introduces the field of publication design, a survey of the current state of digital publishing, and an overview of student magazines in higher education. The practical part complements the theoretical background with local survey results and personal market analysis, then presents a new, unified visual style and technical solution for print and web. The outcome of the work presented in this paper is a proposed digital magazine prototype based on the redesign of the print edition that utilizes interactive elements and improved legibility for a better online reading experience.

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This paper examines the visual design process, publishing workflow, and marketing strategy of the VSKK (Vysoká Škola Kreativní Komunikace) student magazine Povstalec N°2 for print and web. The theoretical part introduces the field of publication design, the current state of digital publishing, and an overview of student magazines in higher education. The practical part complements the theory background with local survey results and personal market analysis. Then presents a new, unified visual style and technical solution for print and web. The outcome of the work presented in this paper is a proposed digital magazine prototype that utilizes interactive elements and improved legibility for a better online reading experience.

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• [x] Italicize Povstalec N°2 → Povstalec N°2
• [x] the theory background → the theoretical background
• [ ] Consider this edit…
  • Before: The outcome of the work presented in this paper is a proposed digital magazine prototype that utilizes interactive elements and improved legibility for a better online reading experience.
  • After: The outcome of the work presented in this paper proposes a digital magazine prototype based on the redesign of the print edition that utilizes interactive elements and improved legibility for a better reading experience, online and offline.
  • Note: In the last sentence, “online and offline” and even “online” on it’s own could be omitted.
• [x] Thoughts on omitting "print and web" in first sentence, does it change your thesis too much?
  • Before: This paper examines the visual design process, publishing workflow, and marketing strategy of the VSKK (Vysoká Škola Kreativní Komunikace) student magazine Povstalec N°2 for print and web
  • After: This paper examines the visual design process, publishing workflow, and marketing strategy of the VSKK (Vysoká Škola Kreativní Komunikace) student magazine Povstalec N°2.