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Portfolio Mob Menu Review #11

Closed petushka1 closed 2 years ago

petushka1 commented 2 years ago

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petushka1 commented 2 years ago

I’m sorry I mixed up the days and applied uncomplicated project. This should be for mob menu. I apologise. I tried to cancel submission but failed.

Вт, 10 мая 2022 г. в 00:50, Yassine Omari @.***>:

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Hi @petushka1 https://github.com/petushka1 ,

Good job so far! There are some issues that you still need to work on to go to the next project but you are almost there! Highlights

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In script.js https://github.com/petushka1/microverse-m1-w1-d3-portfolio-production/pull/11#discussion_r868498944 :

+function opened() {

  • div.style.display = 'block';

+}

+

+function closed() {

  • div.style.display = 'none';

+}

+

+div.className = 'extended';

+

+img.className = 'icon';

+img.src = './img/close.svg';

+div.appendChild(img);

+img.addEventListener('click', closed);

+

+ul.className = 'menu-extended';

+div.appendChild(ul);

+

+a.href = '#about';

-

I think there is a misunderstanding here you should make the project cards generated dynamically using Javascript by storing projects information in an array and display that each project information and in more detail when the user click on the See the project button

project card [image: image] https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/61790587/167504112-ee50562d-5b9e-4fa4-b997-57c0a190aee1.png

window popup for more detail [image: image] https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/61790587/167504170-67fc4d48-f8ea-4aba-8e46-f68beca53d52.png

and don't forget the design for mobile also

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youmari commented 2 years ago

@petushka1 it's okay then just try to submit again the correct Pull Request