Closed elstoc closed 4 years ago
I've been working with AP on this. He did his final review of the hackmd article last night and so the text has been reviewed by him and he handed it to me to put together. I saw you had been doing some editing of it on hackmd but as AP considered it final I thought it best to transfer now so he doesn't have to review again.
I have it up on my local copy of the site. Happy to pm you the address if you want to check it.
Sounds good! Thank you for the efforts.
On January 27, 2020 6:58:57 AM PST, elstoc notifications@github.com wrote:
I've been working with AP on this. He did his final review of the hackmd article last night and so the text has been reviewed by him and he handed it to me to put together. I saw you had been doing some editing of it on hackmd but as AP considered it final I thought it best to transfer now so he doesn't have to review again.
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@elstoc If you have time to improve the article a bit. This is a presentation a colleague of mine gave last weekend: https://marc-muehlfeld.de/writing_clear_docs.pdf
@cryptomilk I don't understand exactly what you think needs to be changed here - you appear to be merely suggesting that the article is "not clear" so I'm not sure what you think I should do about it?
Please note that this is not my article but was taken from hackmd (which was a community-edited translation of the original darktable.fr article by Aurélien Pierre). My involvement was in assisting with that editing process and transferring to the pixls.us article. I tried to make my edits such that the original sense and layout of the article was not altered but that it read better in English than the automatic-translation that it started out with.
As such I'm not really comfortable making major changes to it. Perhaps you could do some edits and submit a pull request yourself?
Hey thanks for this! I've been editing this article down over the weekend but hadn't finished yet. Did you grab this from hackmd?
Also AP needs to do a final proof as well.
On January 27, 2020 4:48:45 AM PST, elstoc notifications@github.com wrote: