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Polish paragraphs #1

Open MrValdez opened 6 years ago

MrValdez commented 6 years ago

Run a polish pass on your paragraphs.

Some paragraphs are hard to read either because 1) you repeat the statements to make the paragraph longer or 2) the sentences can be better written.

pogisijeremy commented 6 years ago

Introduction,

Now a days technology has change our way of disseminating information. Technology provides us enough informations to get prepared when it comes to different types of calamities like flooding.

The province of isabela is surrounded by rivers like the Cagayan river, and Magat river. Municipalities of isabela like aurora, Cabatuan, Cauayan, Ilagan,Gamu, Naguilian Tumauini and Cabagan often get flooded and lot of families were being affected since they were not able to evacuate immediately because they are only depending on the Warning or Evacuation notice from Local Municipalities Disaster risk management units and warning notice were not immediately disseminated due to, most of the baranggay were too far from the poblacion. with this device that will be put up or set-up along the bridges where magat and cagayan river are passing, this will provide fast and immediate warning information or evacuation notice to the public.

Objective

The idea is to create a device for the flood prone municipalities of isabela, This device will be build with arduino uno, this device will monitor the water level on of the Cagayan river and Magat river once the water level has reach its critical level where the critical level The device will send warning messages on the contacts that was save on the device for evacuation and flood notice.Contact information of Baraggay Captains, Disaster Personnel, CIty/Municipality administrators will be save on the device where it will send the warning message.