Website narrative edits

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Website narrative edits #32

Closed yiannisbot closed 1 year ago

yiannisbot commented 1 year ago

Overall, it looks pretty good. Some minor editorial suggestions in this PR. In a next iteration, we might want to split some of the text in bullet points to capture main items easier.

On the structure:

I like the "Trends" vs "Snapshot" split. Maybe we should make that clear upfront. I'll actually make a follow up edit to add this in the beginning.
I would vote for having the "Kubo vs HTTP" table further up, just under the "Website Probes" numbers and then dive deeper into the rest.

yiannisbot commented 1 year ago

I've done a second commit which doesn't show up here (yet?). Likely related to a github incident reported today.

Reading through again, there is some repetition at places, which we can address in a subsequent review round. Having a template so that when we edit all pages update at once will definitely help!

dennis-tra commented 1 year ago

Added your changes to this PR: https://github.com/plprobelab/website/pull/34

That PR also adds a template file 👍