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Review Ticket for 'Preparación de un ambiente integrado para Python (Linux)' - Spanish translation #38

Closed acrymble closed 7 years ago

acrymble commented 7 years ago

The Programming Historian has received the following translation on 'Preparación de un ambiente integrado para Python (Linux)' by @vgayolrs . This lesson is now under review and can be read at:

http://programminghistorian.org/es/lecciones/instalacion-linux

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mariajoafana commented 7 years ago

Here are my comments/suggestions.

Línea 19: punto final (.) desués de "sudo Línea 23: sugiero cambiar "asegurarse que tienes" por "asegurarse de tener" Línea 33: espacio de sobre antes de "Guardarás". Corregir "sert". Mínuscula en "Pero". Tilde en "hará". Mayúscula en "Home". Línea 42: coma (,) después de "Komodo Edit es un editor de texto libre y de código abierto, ..." Eliminar espacio extra después de "prefieres." Cambiar "Ubunto" por Ubuntu". Mayúscula en Komodo. "Clic" en vez de "click". Línea 57: eliminar espacio extra entre "como programa." y "El intérprete". Línea 66: eliminar espacio extra despues de Run Línea 72: corregior "los que se conocer" por "lo que se conoce"

vgayolrs commented 7 years ago

Thank you @mariajoafana , done.

arojascastro commented 7 years ago

Doubts:

Suggested changes:

acrymble commented 7 years ago

sudo is a unix command.

vgayolrs commented 7 years ago

Thank you very much @arojascastro . Done!

Although it is not explained in the original lesson (because every Linux and OS-X user is familiar with that UNIX command), I have included the link to Wikipedia for sudo.

I note that the hello-world1 image also does not unfold in the original lesson, and that is because it's missing in the correspondent folder. But I guess when the problem with that image gets fixed, it will appear. Should I open a ticket on that, @acrymble ?

acrymble commented 7 years ago

yes please do open a ticket on the main repo if you find problems with existing lessons.

acrymble commented 7 years ago

added translation reviewers. this lesson is published.