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Mentorship Success-L'Oreal #186

Open jaahmuhl opened 2 years ago

jaahmuhl commented 2 years ago

Raw Footage: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1iHm3lfqVYii8vSVm-euuJABq1JUGrIiQ/view?usp=sharing

jaahmuhl commented 2 years ago

Transcript: https://www.rev.com/transcript-editor/shared/4GPIwy-h_fwdtyRCVcyTG-5MGMOwyXWScKksxNUY8k8W0B93tgogCYADpXu_rWkYK3124XTVufxXg-vK2qYSMmjKRmc?loadFrom=SharedLink

bryanace53 commented 2 years ago

https://drive.google.com/drive/u/4/folders/1n30Hwp8DDfcn5Fek2Grtj3lKmKmCrl_I

mikepromazo commented 2 years ago

Notes on Short clips:

Short clip 1 - cut “so” at the end of Tiffany talking Short clip 2 - Ok Short clip 3 (Tiffany talking about Catarina having it together) - Ok, consider including in main video. I will update as I review the main video Short clip 4 - longer but it’s all good content. Ok Short clip 5 - Caterina is cut off at the end. Extend this piece then OK

New short clip to create: Tiffany Lemon: (40:09) One thing that I think, sorry, just one thing I think I'll add to it is if someone doesn't feel like they can commit to being a hundred percent in, then it might not be for them. And it's okay. It's not like you're being judged because you can't do it, but it would be such a huge disservice to the mentee. If the mentor can't commit and likewise, if a mentee cannot commit, then it's a, it short changes the mentor on their time. So I, I am very passionate when we talked about how do I have the time? What did it mean to me? And all of that, like if I'm gonna give, do something, I'm gonna give it a hundred percent. So, you know, I feel like the program encourages you to show up and, you know, when you show up at your, your best self, then good things happen.

bryanace53 commented 2 years ago

Perfect thanks Mike!

mikepromazo commented 2 years ago

Hey Bryan I added a new short clip to be created with the Rev timestamp above.

I also went through and built the transcript for the current rough draft and added comments about trimming certain sections, reordering, and adding new sections in that were missing. Please edit the video according to this doc then we can figure out where else we need to trim before finalizing.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NVwvMMhUL0Vz2ltg2WLFBFU3TbmVahpIRwVu_z7sViM/edit#

bryanace53 commented 2 years ago

Hey Mike,

Sounds good I will send you the updated edits.

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Hey Bryan I added a short clip with the Rev timestamp above.

I also went through and built the transcript for the current rough draft and added comments about trimming certain sections, reordering, and adding new sections in that were missing. Please edit the video according to this doc then we can figure out where else we need to trim before finalizing.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NVwvMMhUL0Vz2ltg2WLFBFU3TbmVahpIRwVu_z7sViM/edit#

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bryanace53 commented 2 years ago

Here are the new cuts let me know what you think. https://drive.google.com/drive/u/4/folders/1n30Hwp8DDfcn5Fek2Grtj3lKmKmCrl_I

mikepromazo commented 2 years ago

Thanks Bryan. Going forward please add the date to all video file names. This will make it easier to keep track of versions.

Here are my notes on both the Short and medium length clips: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NVwvMMhUL0Vz2ltg2WLFBFU3TbmVahpIRwVu_z7sViM/edit#

mikepromazo commented 2 years ago

Bryan - updated short clip captions and medium length edits: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NVwvMMhUL0Vz2ltg2WLFBFU3TbmVahpIRwVu_z7sViM/edit#

mikepromazo commented 2 years ago

Bryan - updated comments on the doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NVwvMMhUL0Vz2ltg2WLFBFU3TbmVahpIRwVu_z7sViM/edit#heading=h.cs7jcwl426in

bryanace53 commented 2 years ago

https://drive.google.com/drive/u/4/folders/1n30Hwp8DDfcn5Fek2Grtj3lKmKmCrl_I