Section 3.1: We're having difficulty parsing the following sentence. Does rewriting the last part of the sentence improve readability?
Current:
In some cases, it might be sufficient to limit application data sent
in 0-RTT to that which only causes actions at a server that are known
to be free of lasting effect.
Perhaps (clarifying that the data should not cause lasting effects):
In some cases, it might be sufficient to limit the application data sent
in 0-RTT to data that does not cause actions with lasting effects at a
server.
britram
commented
2 years ago
Section 3.1: We're having difficulty parsing the following sentence. Does rewriting the last part of the sentence improve readability?
Current: In some cases, it might be sufficient to limit application data sent in 0-RTT to that which only causes actions at a server that are known to be free of lasting effect.
Perhaps (clarifying that the data should not cause lasting effects): In some cases, it might be sufficient to limit the application data sent in 0-RTT to data that does not cause actions with lasting effects at a server.