Section 11.2: Does removing redundant wording improve the readability of the following?
Current:
Conversely, in the opposite limit where every server handles multiple
simultaneous migrations, even an exposed server mapping may be
insufficient information.
Perhaps:
Conversely, when every server handles multiple
simultaneous migrations, even an exposed server mapping may be
insufficient information.
britram
commented
2 years ago
Section 11.2: Does removing redundant wording improve the readability of the following?
Current: Conversely, in the opposite limit where every server handles multiple simultaneous migrations, even an exposed server mapping may be insufficient information.
Perhaps: Conversely, when every server handles multiple simultaneous migrations, even an exposed server mapping may be insufficient information.