Section 1: We suggest rewording this sentence to avoid awkward phrasing. In particular, "than is the case" seems out of place. Does the suggested text change the original meaning of the sentence?
Original:
Encryption of most transport-layer control
signaling means that less information is visible to the network than
is the case with TCP.
Perhaps:
Encryption of most transport-layer control
signaling means that less information is visible to the network in
comparison to TCP.
mirjak
commented
2 years ago
Section 1: We suggest rewording this sentence to avoid awkward phrasing. In particular, "than is the case" seems out of place. Does the suggested text change the original meaning of the sentence?
Original:
Perhaps: Encryption of most transport-layer control signaling means that less information is visible to the network in comparison to TCP.