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Applicability and Manageability Statements
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Section 2.2 (comment 8) #532

Open LPardue opened 2 years ago

LPardue commented 2 years ago

Section 2.2: We have updated the following to improve readability. Please let us know if any changes are necessary.

Original:

   The Length field is variable
   length, and its position in the header is also variable depending on
   the length of the source and destination connection ID;

Current (updating "is also variable" to "also varies" and making "length" and "ID" plural): The Length field is a variable-length field, and its position in the header also varies depending on the lengths of the Source and Destination Connection IDs;

mirjak commented 2 years ago

Okay for me