I've made some suggestsions here. Some of them are changes to slightly-more-active voice, while others are very small bits of new content or general tweaks to what is being said.
Let me know if anything is unclear, and feel free to view the bits of changes separately when deciding whether to incorporate them.
Thanks for all the hard work that went into writing this, as well as your work in organizing the sprint in the first place.
Hi @hturner,
I've made some suggestsions here. Some of them are changes to slightly-more-active voice, while others are very small bits of new content or general tweaks to what is being said.
Let me know if anything is unclear, and feel free to view the bits of changes separately when deciding whether to incorporate them.
Thanks for all the hard work that went into writing this, as well as your work in organizing the sprint in the first place.