Closed autophage closed 13 years ago
The "developers and sysadmins" text is not phrased very well. Specifically, the middle paragraph (the long one) is one long run-on sentence that I can't really make sense of.
I've broken into sentences and reviewed it slightly. Do you think it's better now?
The "developers and sysadmins" text is not phrased very well. Specifically, the middle paragraph (the long one) is one long run-on sentence that I can't really make sense of.