raindew18 / Shooting-related-occurrences-reported-to-Toronto-Police-Service

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Peer Review by Sakura #2

Open NotSakura opened 2 months ago

NotSakura commented 2 months ago

Opening statement summary

Large title but based on that I would say your report is about shooting related charges in Toronto.

Strong positive points

You follow the structure of reproducible data foldler which is great.

Critical improvements needed

Almost no changes made in the paper. None of the scripts are updated and the starter folder still has the professors name on it. Much work to be done as your paper is incomplete. Your scripts are as well. You have loaded the data so thats good but done little to no analysis on it, at least none that I can see.

Add your sketches and add your llm usage as well.

Commit your chnages if you cannot see them in this repository

Suggestions for improvement:

I think ou just have to get started. Make sure you use cross refernces correctly and have all the necessary sections.

Evaluation:

0/100

Reason:

you might get some marks for loading the data but you don't have the llm usage so thats an automatic 0. Good luck!

NotSakura commented 2 months ago

Also as the professor said please shorten your title