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A Learn Resource for the Sense HAT
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Closed jrobinson-uk closed 9 years ago

jrobinson-uk commented 9 years ago

@LornaLynch @lauraclay Do either of you have time to Copy edit this resource please. Might be a couple of image changes/additions tomorrow, but largely finished

lauraclay commented 9 years ago

Have taken a look, a couple more things need looking at:

FYI I'm available until 12:30GMT today but will be away in the afternoon/evening.

LornaLynch commented 9 years ago

My availability is pretty rubbish today, I'm afraid, but I'll do what I can.

Lorna Lynch Copy Editor Raspberry Pi Foundation www.raspberrypi.org

On 22 May 2015 at 09:44, lauraclay notifications@github.com wrote:

Have taken a look, a couple more things need looking at:

  • The code has mangled itself so the backticks are visible, and I couldn't seem to fix it
  • Check I haven't changed the meaning of line 473. Have assumed it was 'plus or minus 1g' but the symbol had got garbled.

FYI I'm available until 12:30GMT today but will be away in the afternoon/evening.

— Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub https://github.com/raspberrypilearning/getting-started-with-astro-pi/issues/1#issuecomment-104573250 .

LornaLynch commented 9 years ago

The formatting looks as if it has got completely messed up towards the end of the document: I haven't touched that yet, so I don't know what's caused it. I'm going to see if I can organise any childcare for later.

jrobinson-uk commented 9 years ago

I've now sorted the code formatting and back tick issue. Laura I can see the +/- symbol (line 476 now).

I've a couple of minor updates to make later (image change) and a bit of text for each example

LornaLynch commented 9 years ago

I've had a look and it all seems good to me now. While I was checking I noticed that sensors/movement.md is still missing its final section, but I'm guessing @davidhoness is on top of that.

LornaLynch commented 9 years ago

I'll be around again later this afternoon/evening. If there's anything you need, let me know.

Lorna Lynch Raspberry Pi Foundation www.raspberrypi.orghttp://www.raspberrypi.org

On 22 May 2015, at 10:46, James Robinson notifications@github.com<mailto:notifications@github.com> wrote:

I've now sorted the code formatting and back tick issue. Laura I can see the +/- symbol (line 476 now).

I've a couple of minor updates to make later (image change) and a bit of text for each example

Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHubhttps://github.com/raspberrypilearning/getting-started-with-astro-pi/issues/1#issuecomment-104599590.

lauraclay commented 9 years ago

Thanks so much @LornaLynch and @jrobinson-uk. I was powering through before the first coffee of the day, so I'll blame the code-munging on that!

LornaLynch commented 9 years ago

It was all down to James! :)

Lorna Lynch Raspberry Pi Foundation www.raspberrypi.orghttp://www.raspberrypi.org

On 22 May 2015, at 12:48, lauraclay notifications@github.com<mailto:notifications@github.com> wrote:

Thanks so much @LornaLynchhttps://github.com/LornaLynch and @jrobinson-ukhttps://github.com/jrobinson-uk. I was powering through before the first coffee of the day, so I'll blame the code-munging on that!

Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHubhttps://github.com/raspberrypilearning/getting-started-with-astro-pi/issues/1#issuecomment-104641377.