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Installing and using Raspbian on the Raspberry Pi
https://www.raspberrypi.org/learning/software-guide
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copyedit #3

Closed MarcScott closed 8 years ago

MarcScott commented 8 years ago

Hi @LornaLynch and @lauraclay, Could I get a copy edit please? Thanks

LornaLynch commented 8 years ago

In backup.md, the first two links at the foot of the document (Installing Rasbpian and Quick Start Guide) weren't working. I made them point at quickstart.md, as that seemed to be what was intended, but please check them to be sure.

LornaLynch commented 8 years ago

In quickstart.md, the links to the Hardward document aren't working, but I guess we can't fix this until it goes live?

LornaLynch commented 8 years ago

Done apart from the points above.

MissPhilbin commented 8 years ago

@LornaLynch Would you mind taking another look over this repo. I've found typos in some of the files. These may have been introduced after your last pass. Thanks.

LornaLynch commented 8 years ago

Sure, @MissPhilbin: I'll have a look now.

LornaLynch commented 8 years ago

Query - quickstart.md is currently titled "Raspberry Pi Software Guide", but all the linked pages refer to it as "Quick Start Guide". For consistency's sake, do we want the title to be "Software Guide", "Quick Start Guide", or "Software Quick Start Guide"?

MissPhilbin commented 8 years ago

'Raspberry Pi Software Guide' please.

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Query - quickstart.md is currently titled "Raspberry Pi Software Guide", but all the linked pages refer to it as "Quick Start Guide". Do we want the title to be "Software Guide", "Quick Start Guide", or "Software Quick Start Guide"?

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LornaLynch commented 8 years ago

Thanks!

LornaLynch commented 8 years ago

Done, @MissPhilbin :)

MissPhilbin commented 8 years ago

Thank you!

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