JoshOrndorff
commented
5 years ago I've corrected these issues in f8f4aa52eb2e2a365c67dc68203aaea314be4895
Regarding the very last one, should we avoid the phrase "decentralized autonomous organization" entirely? That's a buzz word in the smart contract industry. That's what DAO as in "the DAO" stands for. Although we are certainly decentralized and an organization, and in some sense autonomous, we aren't the very specific smart-contract-governed DAO that many will think of when reading that.
bjornagain
HOME PAGE: Dependable and Secure for all Applications --> Dependable and Secure for All Applications
Engage with the Community ... lifting our world up and affecting real, positive change, we will help each other flourish. --> ... lifting our world up and effecting real, positive change, we will help each other flourish.
[bottom of page] Ready to Affect Change? --> Ready to Effect Change?
The RChain Platform
CURRENT STATE ...Sequential computing inevitably limits scalability and speed, while increases transaction costs --> Sequential computing inevitably limits scalability and speed, while increasing transaction costs
Massive energy and computational requirements have left the promise of decentralized mass adoption unrealized. [Seems like an overstatement] --> Massive energy and computational requirements are major obstacles to mass adoption of decentralized systems.
NAMESPACES Namespaces, virtual groups of Rnodes within the Rchain network... --> Namespaces, virtual groups of RNodes within the RChain network...
Next-generation sharding divides the network into optimized pieces, solving for the racing condition --> Next-generation sharding divides the network into optimized pieces, solving the race condition
Rholang ... Rholang is natively executed by Rnodes --> Rholang is natively executed by RNodes
Community Overview The Power of the Cooperative ...allowing anyone with an interest to affect our movement
--> allowing anyone with an interest to contribute to our movement
Leadership page
RChain Cooperative ...for RChain to grow into, to remain, a publicly owned and operated information utility.RChain
--> for RChain to grow into, and remain, a publicly owned and operated information utility. RChain
RChain Cooperative members form decentralized autonomous organization. (Sounds a little awkward because it feels like there should be an "s" on the end of "organization", but I think it's meant to be as is. Could "create" be used instead of "form"?) RChain Cooperative members create decentralized autonomous organization. or rephrase as something like: Cooperation leads to the emergence of decentralized autonomous organization.