Section 2, Sentence 4: I would suggest changing “Internally, the static (EC)DH keys are provided to any TLS Decrypter devices” to “Internally, the static (EC)DH keys are provided to authorized TLS Decrypter devices”.
Alternatively, you might use “appropriate” instead of “authorized” if you feel that is better. “Any” sounds too broad and may raise security concerns with some.
rdroms
commented
7 years ago
Section 2, Sentence 4: I would suggest changing “Internally, the static (EC)DH keys are provided to any TLS Decrypter devices” to “Internally, the static (EC)DH keys are provided to authorized TLS Decrypter devices”.
Alternatively, you might use “appropriate” instead of “authorized” if you feel that is better. “Any” sounds too broad and may raise security concerns with some.