Paragraph 5:
OLD
An advantage of this proposal is that it can be implemented using
software modifications to the TLS server only, without the need to
make changes to TLS client implementations.
NEW
An advantage of this proposal is that it can be implemented using
software modifications to the TLS server and enterprise network monitoring tools only, without the need to
make changes to TLS client implementations.
From Tim Polk:
Paragraph 5: OLD An advantage of this proposal is that it can be implemented using software modifications to the TLS server only, without the need to make changes to TLS client implementations. NEW An advantage of this proposal is that it can be implemented using software modifications to the TLS server and enterprise network monitoring tools only, without the need to make changes to TLS client implementations.