Such monitoring is ubiquitous and indispensable in some industries.
This monitoring is required for effective and safe operation of
enterprise networks. Loss of this capability may slow adoption of
TLS 1.3.
I suggest:
Such monitoring of the enterprise network is ubiquitous and indispensable in some industries.
This monitoring is required for effective and safe operation of
enterprise networks. Loss of this capability may slow adoption of
TLS 1.3.
rdroms
commented
7 years ago
From Russ Housley:
Section 1, 3rd Paragraph:
Such monitoring is ubiquitous and indispensable in some industries. This monitoring is required for effective and safe operation of enterprise networks. Loss of this capability may slow adoption of TLS 1.3.
I suggest:
Such monitoring of the enterprise network is ubiquitous and indispensable in some industries. This monitoring is required for effective and safe operation of enterprise networks. Loss of this capability may slow adoption of TLS 1.3.