search

rfc-editor / draft-nottingham-avoiding-internet-centralization

AUTH48 for RFC-to-be 9518 <draft-nottingham-avoiding-internet-centralization-14>
https://mnot.github.io/avoiding-internet-centralization/
Other
0 stars 0 forks source link

Pronoun/Antecedent clarification question (Section 4.2) #3

Closed mferguson-rpc closed 11 months ago

mferguson-rpc commented 1 year ago

May we clarify that "they" refers to "decentralization techniques"?

Original: Any claim needs to be critically evaluated: as discussed in Section 2, not all centralization is automatically harmful, and per Section 3, decentralization techniques do not automatically address all centralization harms - and they may bring their own risks.

Perhaps: Any claim needs to be critically evaluated. As discussed in Section 2, not all centralization is automatically harmful, and per Section 3, decentralization techniques do not automatically address all centralization harms and these techniques may bring their own risks.

mnot commented 11 months ago

I'd rather not, that's very repetitive.

apaloma-rpc commented 11 months ago

Thank you for your feedback. Is this suggested text acceptable?

Perhaps: Any claim needs to be critically evaluated. As discussed in Section 2, not all centralization is automatically harmful. Per Section 3, decentralization techniques do not automatically address all centralization harms and may bring their own risks.

mnot commented 11 months ago

Perfect, thanks.