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Wordsmith "2. We help organizations extract maximum value from the hybrid cloud" #65

Open kattekrab opened 2 years ago

kattekrab commented 2 years ago

17 is live!

https://rht-labs.com/docs/how-we-differentiate.html

Can we wordsmith this line, cos it's a bit long?

  1. We help organizations extract maximum value from the hybrid cloud

Organizations and hybrid cloud are important here, so is there a shorter way to express "extract maximum value"?

Maybe... "We help organizations maximise the value of the hybrid cloud" "We help organizations maximise value with the hybrid cloud"

kattekrab commented 2 years ago

@mwalker5000 how about this?