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A repository for feedback on Troy Hunt's book.
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missing word "in"? #46

Closed mrutgers closed 1 year ago

mrutgers commented 1 year ago

This is what I read:

in part so as not to disclose personal information about Jan and part because ...

This is what I think it should be:

in part so as not to disclose personal information about Jan and in part because ...

or perhaps:

partly so as not to disclose personal information about Jan and partly because ...

pdf version 001 page 211, reading with Edge on Windows 11

troyhunt commented 1 year ago

Cheers, fixed at source with a very slight variation:

in part so as not to disclose personal information about Jan and in part

@robconery will fix in the book.