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`any` instead of `and` in chapter "Here’s everything that goes into a massive international speaking trip" #51

Closed skipishere closed 1 year ago

skipishere commented 1 year ago

Where'd you find this? Page number from PDF would be helpful

328

What's the problem?

Should be and instead of any This is what I read:

This is the part of being away that really sucks and any remaining gloss that was
on the idea of international travel is well any truly gone.

This is what I think it should be:

This is the part of being away that really sucks and any remaining gloss that was
on the idea of international travel is well and truly gone.

How are you reading the book?

Windows 11 PDF v0.1

troyhunt commented 1 year ago

This just felt like an awkward sentence so I've rewritten it as follows in source:

This is the part of being away that really sucks any remaining gloss off the notion that international travel is all glamour.

@robconery can copy this directly into the book.