Introduction must be snappier

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Introduction must be snappier #40

Closed badlogic closed 9 years ago

badlogic commented 9 years ago

Should read like an advertisement, probably similar to getting started page.

What?
Why? (Technical and business)
How? (Rough overview of features)

ajhager commented 9 years ago

Yeah, break it up into smaller paragraphs with as few words as possible to get the points across. At the moment my eyes start to blur over looking at that first big paragraph.