On Page 3 of 4, there's a break between the sentence "They can be found nearby at the southern ridge and scattered around the northern reaches" and "of Earthrise.", which is placed with the next paragraph on describing the third item.
I also might suggest tweaking it to "southern ridge of the Camp"so it more directly describes the general area, to avoid it getting possibly misread as referring to the island as a whole.
Reported By: Alatar Tharkun Category: QUEST
On Page 3 of 4, there's a break between the sentence "They can be found nearby at the southern ridge and scattered around the northern reaches" and "of Earthrise.", which is placed with the next paragraph on describing the third item.
I also might suggest tweaking it to "southern ridge of the Camp"so it more directly describes the general area, to avoid it getting possibly misread as referring to the island as a whole.