rogerburtonpatel / vml

Code and proofs for Verse-ML, an equation-style sub-ml language. Part of an undergraduate senior thesis with Norman Ramsey, Milod Kazerounian, and Roger Burtonpatel.
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rough draft of introduction #1

Closed nrnrnr closed 8 months ago

nrnrnr commented 9 months ago

Norman will review

rogerburtonpatel commented 9 months ago

Posting this when it's a little more workable from your end. End of weekend.

rogerburtonpatel commented 9 months ago

Finished today. Sleeping on it and posting tomorrow.

rogerburtonpatel commented 9 months ago

https://github.com/rogerburtonpatel/vml/commit/b8b9e9bc8113dd6414c242472f03ca5d3aa2ec19

Notes:

I like the first part, up to the last 2 sentences.

  1. I don't know if the last sentence is true, even if the first is hypothetically true. I'd like your input on this.
  2. The last sentence is ugly and boring. I want to include these details, but don't know if this is the right place for them.

Other things:

needs work. I like its ideas but not its form. Would very much appreciate workshopping this, and the last sentence, with you. Thank you as always.

Overall, I'm fairly happy with this as a shitty first draft. It's got a long way to go!

nrnrnr commented 8 months ago

For now I think we're good here. Can reopen when it's time.