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PDF, ePUB and Mobi versions of “Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality”, from LaTeX source
http://hpmor.com/
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ch117 add punctuation #126

Closed entorb closed 1 year ago

rrthomas commented 1 year ago

My impression is that the lack of punctuation is deliberate. Some other formatting is needed to show that this is Harry's disordered thoughts; perhaps to put it in italics? (Is something similar done elsewhere?)

entorb commented 1 year ago

did not find other occurrences of thoughs without punctuation

entorb commented 1 year ago

only one similar finding: https://github.com/rrthomas/hpmor/pull/131

rrthomas commented 1 year ago

OK, then what about thoughts in general? Are they usually in quotation marks? I agree that we shouldn't have a unique style in just one place.

entorb commented 1 year ago

I now formatted the paragraph using emph, as often used for Harry's thoughts, what do you think?

rrthomas commented 1 year ago

I think it's good!