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Address Warren's nits #16

Closed seanturner closed 7 years ago

seanturner commented 7 years ago

Warren noted the following nits in his ballot:

1: "Development of The Universal Solution has proved hard,
however, for all the usual reasons."  -- this is cute, but leaves
people wondering what "all the usual reasons are". Perhaps just
"Development of The Universal Solution has, however,  proved
hard." (or just cut after the "however in the original").

2: I'm not sure why you have "Protocol" in the terminology section.
It doesn't seem like it is useful for the document, and this document
doesn't seem like the right place to (re) define it.

3: Acknowledgements:
Funny spacing in "Olle E.     Johansson