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rephrase s2.3 last para #18

Closed seanturner closed 7 years ago

seanturner commented 7 years ago

Ben noted is his comments:

2.3, last paragraph: The paragraph is a single,
convoluted sentence that is hard to parse. (It's
also a comma splice). Please consider breaking
into multiple simpler sentences.