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Section 2 - Problem Statement #15

Closed jimsch closed 9 years ago

jimsch commented 9 years ago

Version -03

this text currently outlines a problem, but not a problem statement. I would like to see some additional text added that says what this document (or group of documents) is actually trying to do. Thus at the end of the first paragraph something about - We are creating a data model that will allow for administrators to share with others and to use data from others in a standardized method. (is this is in this document or should a pointer be added to the data model document?)

llorenzin commented 9 years ago

Resolution - add "We are standardizing an information model, data models, operations, and transports that will allow for administrators to share with others and to use data from others interoperably." to section 2.

llorenzin commented 9 years ago

Fixed in -04