Open dchicherin opened 11 months ago
General comment - I don't disagree with poses/facial expressions, but they require corresponding pictures. which we don't have. Maybe we should focus on having several presets like neutral/ neutral speaking/ excited/...etc?
Earning Gold: - It's almost the same as completing tasks at this point. Maybe just leave completing a task as a trigger. I think we should put more emphasis on affirmative messages and significantly extend the list
Editing a Task: - what is a trigger here? judging by the text it seems like a reaction to being in progress of editing. I think it should more along the lines of of "Successfully updated task" Deleting a Task: - same as above. since the click on update or edit saves changes/deletes task and immediately moves user to Home Screen those messages are mostly needed to avoid "so wtf happened" kind of reaction in my opinion
Checking Settings/Profile: - sounds ok, might need to clarify what is a trigger for this Logging Out or Closing the App: - we don't have a login system and when you close the app it closes so user will never see those
Searching for a Task: &When nothing is found: - when search is active, keyboard hides character and dialogue bubble. also search is happening on every character typed so results will change all the time. maybe get rid of those?
Should probably add phrases for when character is picked and is tapped for interaction (last seems somewhat important) Overall I think it is worth considering making phrases more about "Let's" rather than about commenting on user's actions. like "Let's see what we can do there!". It seems somehow better to me and less creepy. Maybe also explore idea "mascot/companion = system" (idk I was left unattended and they are called companions now I guess) - like "Got rid of it!" when task is deleted
@dchicherin on Weekly: Girls are not characters, but representations of the system. They don't take the role of observer or judge
Luna's Phrases:
Upon Opening the App:
Creating a New Task:
Completing a Task:
When a Task is Overdue:
Earning Gold:
Searching for a Task:
When nothing is found:
Editing a Task:
Deleting a Task:
Checking Settings/Profile:
Logging Out or Closing the App:
Luna's Expressions & Poses:
Determined Stance
Celebrate
Thoughtful Search
Reassurance
Curiosity