[!] Mejorar diseño

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~silmud-rampel, whose candle smells like old books and pizza 11:28 PM ~2021.11.11 I think it's weird that the images' captions have breadcrumb navigation in them doubly so since the page title isn't shown as any kind of screamingly-obvious <h1> triply so since the same visual look is used for the "next page in series" link I'd like to second:

• green quotes should mean one thing and only one thing
• narrowing the text to something closer to 60–80 characters max (the ch unit is great here) also the "reconocimientos" section looks all kinds of weird:
• it recycles the blockquote left-hand-side bar, but adds a different background block to the right of it
• it uses what looks like a browser-synthesized oblique of the font you're using instead of a true italic

[sammut-posnev]

~lidreg-dillut9:48 PM~2021.11.11

this looks pretty much fine to me, but it's hard to tell from an image. my personal taste is slightly less wide text, maybe more around ~55 characters per line

9:48

maybe a bit more vertical space between headings and text

9:49

i'd also consider maybe cutting down on the different typographical elements a little bit, i think it's a bit confusing that there are blockquotes, the green quotes, the small caps interstitials, etc; but that's very much taste

[sammut-posnev]

~lidreg-dillut feel free to try the changes on sammut-posnev.com/structure

~tinnus-napbus I just trashed that homepage and tried to do a more tile aproach. Line-height and font-size changed too.

~silmud-rampel I removed those blockquotes and breadcrumb navigation

Thanks everyone for your feedback!

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~silmud-rampel, whose candle smells like old books and pizza12:13 AM~2021.11.16

~sammut-posnev

also, you'll want to use not just regular and italic versions of Poly in your _style.css, but also a bold. You're using a browser-synthesized bold on your page and it looks a little bit bad. You'll probably want to link a bold italic too, just in case you ever use it.

actually since you're using (again, browser-synthesized) small caps you may want to switch your entire font to <

https://www.huertatipografica.com/en/fonts/alegreya-ht-pro

, which comes with properly-designed small caps and a bunch of different weights

12:14

you should only need to bother with the .woff2 files:

https://caniuse.com/?search=woff2

12:17

also it's been a long time since I've been able to read Borges in his native language without constant dictionary lookups but I think tú Urbit ID is a typo

12:34

also it seems weird that your hr { background: url(hr-sammut.svg); } used around the "A continuación…conforman Urbit" is bigger than the horizontal line right above your footer. You may want to have some kind of special "next-section container" style for that kind of thing.

Oh, and the links in "Reconocimientos" should probably be real links.

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https://sammut-posnev.com/~structure