Closed emollier closed 8 months ago
There are better ways to rephrase these involving omitting ‘allows’ or using ‘allows/enables setting’ and similar rather than ‘allows to set’.
Hi John, I admit this is heavy and see whether I can improve the wording.
I tried to vary a bit the style, hopefully the meaning hasn't suffered in the process. I separated what I could to ease further commit references if need be.
It's not my role to review this formally. My comment was intended as a signal more for the maintainers than for the PR author.
Acknowledged, anyways, it is there in case there is interest.
Have a nice day, :) Étienne.
Hi Rob,
Thank you for having taken the time to lookup these changes. I went through your suggestions and found they greatly improved the wording in every case.
Happy new year! :) Étienne.
@emollier @daviesrob, thank you for polishing the language, much appreciated.
In the lot there are a number of instances of "allows to" which in its correct form should be "allows one to", but also a couple of other things caught by lintian, Debian's static package linter.